Hallo,
ich möchte für Englisch ein Referat über die Simpsons schreiben und möchte fragen, ob mir hier vielleicht jemand helfen kann?
Wäre cool.
English Referat
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- Tortenmann
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Wobei brauchst du denn Hilfe?
Hast du Fragen?
Könntest ja wenigstens grob erzählen wie du dein Referat unterteilen willst und wobei genau du Hilfe benötigst. -
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Edo hat mir schon geholfen, danke!
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Zitat
Original von Tortenmann
Edo hat mir schon geholfen, danke!wenn du mal wieder hilfe brauchst, sag einfach bescheid... wäre nicht das erste mal, dass ich nem user zu ner eins verhelfe (wie eingebildet... )
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Hier ist das was ich bis jetzt geschrieben habe, kann sich vielleicht ja mal jemand durchgucken?
The Simpsons
Matt Groening, the innovator of the famous tv show
"The Simpsons" was born on the 15th February 1954.
His first comic was "Life in Hell", but he want another
direction to do. So he wrote and created the Simpsons
for the Tracey Ullman Show. The first tv appearance
was on the 19th April 1987. In 1989, the Simpsons
was adapted into a half-hour series for the Fox
network cooperation.From this time it goes upside.
Now it are over 18th seasons and this year, the
400th episode wil be emanated. The Simpsons plays
in the virtual City named Springfield. This is gag,
because there are over 16 Springfields in the USA.
The Characters:Homer Simpson is the father of the family the Simpsons.
Everytime he does anything wrong he says:"D'oh."Marge Simpson/Bouvier is the Wife of Homer and the
mother of three childs. When she thinks that anything
isn't good she says:"Hrrrrrrm".Bart Simpson is the oldest child of the family of the
Simpsons. He's 10 years old. He says things like:
"Ay Caramba, don't have a cow...". He isn't very clever,
but he's very cool, not like Lisa.Lisa Simpon is very clever, she's the best in her class.
But she isn't cool. Hers best note ever were a 1++.Maggie Simpson is the baby of the family. She always
sucks on a pacifier, falls down a lot and doesn't speak.Alongside the serie, there were comic series. Simpsons
Comics there are to buy every month, Bart Simpson Comics
every second month and Simpsons classics every third month. -
ich lese mir es nachher genau durch und meld mich gegen abend wieder...
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Dankeschön :-))
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Zitat
Matt Groening, the innovator (besser: inventor) of the famous tv show
"The Simpsons" was born on the 15th February 1954.
His first comic was "Life in Hell", but he want another
direction to do. (chose a different way of style) So he wrote and created (because of this he created) the Simpsons for the Tracey Ullman Show. The first tv appearance was on the 19th April 1987. In 1989, the Simpsons
was adapted into (were rewritten to) a half-hour series for the Fox
network cooperation. From this time it goes upside. (form there on their way was straight to the top)
Now it (there) are over 18th seasons and this year, the
400th episode wil be emanated (will be broadcasted). The Simpsons plays (are settled) in the virtual City (a made-up City) named Springfield. This is gag (THis is a kind of joke), because there are over 16 Springfields in the USA.
The Characters:Homer Simpson is the father of the family the Simpsons. (weglassen)
Everytime he does anything wrong he says:"D'oh." (absolut unnütze information. sag was über seinen job, chaarakter, dummheit, missgeschickt etc.)Marge Simpson/Bouvier is the Wife of Homer (his wife) and the
mother of three childs. (mother of three children) When she thinks that anything
isn't good she says:"Hrrrrrrm". (absolut unnütze information. siehe homer)Bart Simpson is the oldest child of the family of the
Simpsons. He's 10 years old. (and ten years old) He says things like:
"Ay Caramba, don't have a cow...". (unnütz. siehe homer) He isn't very clever,
but he's very cool, not like Lisa. (but he's trying to act cool to compensate his lack of knowledge)Lisa Simpson is very clever, she's (and) the best (student) in her class.
But she isn't cool. Hers best note ever were a 1++. (siehe homer etc.)Maggie Simpson is the baby of the family. She always
sucks on a pacifier, falls down a lot and doesn't speak. (she's always sucking on a pacifier, is falling over and hasn't spoken a word up to now)Alongside (besser: beside) the serie (tv episodes), there were (are) comic series. Simpsons Comics there are to buy every month, Bart Simpson Comics
every second month and Simpsons classics every third month.(printed simpsons comics which are published every month or, like the bart simpsons comic, every three month)
hab mal kurz drübergeschaut. fazit:
setzen. 6.keine garantie für richtigkeit und meine rechtschreibung.
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Also Springfield gibts doch über 30 oder?
Und ich glaube, dass du vor den Daten immer das "the" weglassen musst. -
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aso: es ist nicht vollständig. das war das, was ich ebne so in 5min korrigieren konnte. da sind garantiert noch einige dinger drin.
aber, ich glaube, wenns zu perfekt ist, fällts eh auf.
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Hier ist die verbesserte version
Matt Groening, the inventor of the famous tv show
"The Simpsons" was born on the 15th February 1954.
His first comic was "Life in Hell", but he chose a different way of style.
Because of this he created the Simpsons for the Tracey Ullman Show.
The first tv appearance was on the 19th April 1987. In 1989, the Simpsons
were rewitten to a half-hour series for the Fox network cooperation.
From there on their way was straight to the top
Now there are over 18th seasons and this year, the
400th episode will be broadcasted. The Simpsons are settled in a made-up
City named Springfield. This is a kind of joke, because there are over
30 Springfields in the USA.
The Characters:Homer Simpson is the father of the family .
His job is to work in the Powerplant of Springfield. He is the Securityinspector.
But him make very often mystakes and lost his job short time.
In this time he search new jobs or do nothing.Marge Simpson/Bouvier is his wife and mother of three children.
She's the most time at home, she has to attend to Maggie.Bart Simpson is the oldest child and ten years old.
He isn't very clever, but he's trying to act cool to compensate his lack of knowledge.
He's very popular by his friends. He like to skate and to make the city doubtful.Lisa Simpson is very clever and the best student in her class.
Lisa is 8 years old,two years younger than her brother Bart. Lisas mother Marge insisted on
choosing her name because her father Homer wanted to call her "Bartzina".Maggie Simpson is the baby of the family.
She's always sucking on a pacifier, is falling over and hasn't spoken a word up to nowBeside the tv episodes, there are printed simpsons comics which are published every
month or, like the bart simpsons comic, every second month -
Zitat
Original von Tortenmann
Hier ist die verbesserte versionMatt Groening, the inventor of the famous tv show
"The Simpsons" was born on 15th February 1954.
His first comic was "Life in Hell", but he chose a different way of style.
That was the reason why he created the Simpsons for the Tracey Ullman Show.
The first tv appearance was on 19th April 1987. In 1989, the Simpsons
were rewitten to an (das steht so, weil das h stumm ist - also hört es sich an wie ein a) half-hour series for the Fox network cooperation.
From this point of time their way has been straight to the top.
Now there are over 18th seasons and this year, the
400th episode will be broadcasted. The Simpsons are settled in a made-up
City named Springfield. This is a kind of joke, because there are over
30 Springfields in the USA.
The Characters:Homer Simpson is the father of the family .
His job is to work in the Powerplant of Springfield. He is the Securityinspector.
He often makes mistakes and also lost his job for a short time.
At this time he searched new jobs or didn´t do anything.Marge Simpson/Bouvier is his wife and mother of three children.
The most time she´s at home, she has to attend to Maggie.Bart Simpson is the oldest child and ten years old.
He isn't very clever, but he's trying to act cool to compensate his lack of knowledge.
He's very popular. He likes to skate and to make the city doubtful.Lisa Simpson is very clever and the best student in her class.
Lisa is 8 years old,two years younger than her brother Bart. Lisas mother Marge insisted on
choosing her name because her father Homer wanted to call her "Bartzina".Maggie Simpson is the baby of the family.
She's always sucking on a pacifier, is falling over and hasn't spoken a word up to nowBeside the tv episodes, there are printed simpsons comics which are published every
month or, like the bart simpsons comic, every second monthhe, she it - das s muss mit (n paar leichtsinnsfehler waren drin - sonst top)
habs jetzt nur noch kurz überflogen, aber die lösung von ARCHETyPE müsste dir geholfen habenedit: hier wurde nur so viel zitiert, weil in dem zitat bereits die verbesserung ist
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Zitat
Original von stresserella
he, she it - das s muss mit (n paar leichtsinnsfehler waren drin - sonst top)
habs jetzt nur noch kurz überflogen, aber die lösung von ARCHETyPE müsste dir geholfen habenStimmt, den Satz kenne ich schon von meiner Lehrerin.
Danke nochmal an dich. -
warum alles so kompliziert, mien jung?
ZitatHomer Simpson is the father of the family .
His job is to work in the Powerplant of Springfield. He is the Securityinspector. (he is the securityinspector at the nuclear poerplant in springfield.)
He often makes mistakes and also lost his job for a short time. (has lost his job for a few times.)
At this time he searched new jobs or didn´t do anything. (so he had to look for a new job, which hasn't often been successful.)Marge Simpson/Bouvier is his wife and mother of three children.
The most time she´s at home, she has to attend to Maggie. (most of the time she does the housework and looks after maggie)Bart Simpson is the oldest child and ten years old.
He isn't very clever, but he's trying to act cool to compensate his lack of knowledge.
(Because of this) He's very popular (at school). He likes to skate (skating) and to make the city doubtful. (painting the town red [klingt scheisse, is aber so])Lisa Simpson is very clever and the best student in her class.
Lisa is 8 years old. Two years younger than her brother Bart. Lisas mother Marge insisted on
choosing her name because her father Homer wanted to call her "Bartzina". (gave her her name, because Homer's suggestion was "Bartzina")Maggie Simpson is the baby of the family.
She's always sucking on a pacifier, is falling over and hasn't spoken a word up to nowBeside the tv episodes, there are printed simpsons comics which are published every
month or, like the bart simpsons comic, every second monthhab die größten dinger da mals rausgeholt. interpunktion musst du selber machen.
btw: ich empfehle dir das oxford english dictionary. is englisch <-> englisch. sehr hilfreich, wenn man andere wörter für etwas sucht.
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Matt Groening, the inventor of the famous tv show
"The Simpsons" was born on 15th February 1954.
His first comic was "Life in Hell", but he chose a different way of style.
That was the reason why he created the Simpsons for the Tracey Ullman Show.
The first tv appearance was on 19th April 1987. In 1989, the Simpsons
were rewitten to an half-hour series for the Fox network cooperation.
From this point of time their way has been straight to the top.
Now there are over 18th seasons and this year, the
400th episode will be broadcasted. The Simpsons are settled in a made-up
City named Springfield. This is a kind of joke, because there are over
30 Springfields in the USA.
The Characters:Homer Simpson is the father of the family .
He is the securityinspector at the nuclear powerplant in springfield.
He often makes mistakes and has lost his job for a few times.
So he had to look for a new job, that hasn't often been successful.Marge Simpson/Bouvier is his wife and mother of three children.
Most of the time she does the housework and looks after maggie.Bart Simpson is the oldest child and ten years old.
He isn't very clever, but he's trying to act cool to compensate his lack of knowledge.
Because of this he's very popular in school. He likes skating and painting the town red.Lisa Simpson is very clever and the best student in her class.
Lisa is 8 years old, two years younger then her brother Bart. Lisas mother Marge
gave her her name, because Homer's suggestion was "Bartzina".Maggie Simpson is the baby of the family.
She's always sucking on a pacifier, is falling over and hasn't spoken a word up to nowBeside the tv episodes, there are printed simpsons comics which are published every
month or, like the bart simpsons comic, every second month.und jetzt?
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So he had to look for a new job, which hasn't often been successful.
änder mal das which in that. klingt alles nicht gerade so toll, sollte aber seinen zweck erfüllen.
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korrekt wären beide lösungen...
sollte nicht so hochgestochen wirken, also Tortenmann, nimm die einfachere version. man soll ja glauben, dass von nem 13-jährigen ist
lass uns wissen, was dabei rauskam -
Zitat
Original von stresserella
korrekt wären beide lösungen...
ja, aber which klingt da irgendwie noch beschissener als that. wenn ich mir das jetzt nochmal so anschau, frage ich mich, ob ich nicht doch noch ein wenig dicht von gestern war. irgendwie alles recht merkwürdig konsturiert.wenn der/die lehrer/in was zu meckern hat, soll sie sich bei mir melden.