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  • Zitat

    Original von Tortenmann
    Edo hat mir schon geholfen, danke!


    wenn du mal wieder hilfe brauchst, sag einfach bescheid... wäre nicht das erste mal, dass ich nem user zu ner eins verhelfe ;) (wie eingebildet... :D )

  • Hier ist das was ich bis jetzt geschrieben habe, kann sich vielleicht ja mal jemand durchgucken?
    The Simpsons
    Matt Groening, the innovator of the famous tv show
    "The Simpsons" was born on the 15th February 1954.
    His first comic was "Life in Hell", but he want another
    direction to do. So he wrote and created the Simpsons
    for the Tracey Ullman Show. The first tv appearance
    was on the 19th April 1987. In 1989, the Simpsons
    was adapted into a half-hour series for the Fox
    network cooperation.From this time it goes upside.
    Now it are over 18th seasons and this year, the
    400th episode wil be emanated. The Simpsons plays
    in the virtual City named Springfield. This is gag,
    because there are over 16 Springfields in the USA.
    The Characters:


    Homer Simpson is the father of the family the Simpsons.
    Everytime he does anything wrong he says:"D'oh."


    Marge Simpson/Bouvier is the Wife of Homer and the
    mother of three childs. When she thinks that anything
    isn't good she says:"Hrrrrrrm".


    Bart Simpson is the oldest child of the family of the
    Simpsons. He's 10 years old. He says things like:
    "Ay Caramba, don't have a cow...". He isn't very clever,
    but he's very cool, not like Lisa.


    Lisa Simpon is very clever, she's the best in her class.
    But she isn't cool. Hers best note ever were a 1++.


    Maggie Simpson is the baby of the family. She always
    sucks on a pacifier, falls down a lot and doesn't speak.


    Alongside the serie, there were comic series. Simpsons
    Comics there are to buy every month, Bart Simpson Comics
    every second month and Simpsons classics every third month.


  • hab mal kurz drübergeschaut. fazit:
    setzen. 6. ;)


    keine garantie für richtigkeit und meine rechtschreibung.

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  • aso: es ist nicht vollständig. das war das, was ich ebne so in 5min korrigieren konnte. da sind garantiert noch einige dinger drin.



    aber, ich glaube, wenns zu perfekt ist, fällts eh auf. ;)

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  • Hier ist die verbesserte version


    Matt Groening, the inventor of the famous tv show
    "The Simpsons" was born on the 15th February 1954.
    His first comic was "Life in Hell", but he chose a different way of style.
    Because of this he created the Simpsons for the Tracey Ullman Show.
    The first tv appearance was on the 19th April 1987. In 1989, the Simpsons
    were rewitten to a half-hour series for the Fox network cooperation.
    From there on their way was straight to the top
    Now there are over 18th seasons and this year, the
    400th episode will be broadcasted. The Simpsons are settled in a made-up
    City named Springfield. This is a kind of joke, because there are over
    30 Springfields in the USA.
    The Characters:


    Homer Simpson is the father of the family .
    His job is to work in the Powerplant of Springfield. He is the Securityinspector.
    But him make very often mystakes and lost his job short time.
    In this time he search new jobs or do nothing.


    Marge Simpson/Bouvier is his wife and mother of three children.
    She's the most time at home, she has to attend to Maggie.


    Bart Simpson is the oldest child and ten years old.
    He isn't very clever, but he's trying to act cool to compensate his lack of knowledge.
    He's very popular by his friends. He like to skate and to make the city doubtful.


    Lisa Simpson is very clever and the best student in her class.
    Lisa is 8 years old,two years younger than her brother Bart. Lisas mother Marge insisted on
    choosing her name because her father Homer wanted to call her "Bartzina".


    Maggie Simpson is the baby of the family.
    She's always sucking on a pacifier, is falling over and hasn't spoken a word up to now


    Beside the tv episodes, there are printed simpsons comics which are published every
    month or, like the bart simpsons comic, every second month


  • he, she it - das s muss mit ;) (n paar leichtsinnsfehler waren drin - sonst top)
    habs jetzt nur noch kurz überflogen, aber die lösung von ARCHETyPE müsste dir geholfen haben


    edit: hier wurde nur so viel zitiert, weil in dem zitat bereits die verbesserung ist ;)

  • Zitat

    Original von stresserella


    he, she it - das s muss mit ;) (n paar leichtsinnsfehler waren drin - sonst top)
    habs jetzt nur noch kurz überflogen, aber die lösung von ARCHETyPE müsste dir geholfen haben


    Stimmt, den Satz kenne ich schon von meiner Lehrerin.
    Danke nochmal an dich.

  • warum alles so kompliziert, mien jung? ;)


    hab die größten dinger da mals rausgeholt. interpunktion musst du selber machen.



    btw: ich empfehle dir das oxford english dictionary. is englisch <-> englisch. sehr hilfreich, wenn man andere wörter für etwas sucht.

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  • Matt Groening, the inventor of the famous tv show
    "The Simpsons" was born on 15th February 1954.
    His first comic was "Life in Hell", but he chose a different way of style.
    That was the reason why he created the Simpsons for the Tracey Ullman Show.
    The first tv appearance was on 19th April 1987. In 1989, the Simpsons
    were rewitten to an half-hour series for the Fox network cooperation.
    From this point of time their way has been straight to the top.
    Now there are over 18th seasons and this year, the
    400th episode will be broadcasted. The Simpsons are settled in a made-up
    City named Springfield. This is a kind of joke, because there are over
    30 Springfields in the USA.
    The Characters:


    Homer Simpson is the father of the family .
    He is the securityinspector at the nuclear powerplant in springfield.
    He often makes mistakes and has lost his job for a few times.
    So he had to look for a new job, that hasn't often been successful.


    Marge Simpson/Bouvier is his wife and mother of three children.
    Most of the time she does the housework and looks after maggie.


    Bart Simpson is the oldest child and ten years old.
    He isn't very clever, but he's trying to act cool to compensate his lack of knowledge.
    Because of this he's very popular in school. He likes skating and painting the town red.


    Lisa Simpson is very clever and the best student in her class.
    Lisa is 8 years old, two years younger then her brother Bart. Lisas mother Marge
    gave her her name, because Homer's suggestion was "Bartzina".


    Maggie Simpson is the baby of the family.
    She's always sucking on a pacifier, is falling over and hasn't spoken a word up to now


    Beside the tv episodes, there are printed simpsons comics which are published every
    month or, like the bart simpsons comic, every second month.





    und jetzt?


    Das war Seculare Humanist in der Schule, er hatte ne Fehlinformation.

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  • Zitat

    So he had to look for a new job, which hasn't often been successful.


    änder mal das which in that. klingt alles nicht gerade so toll, sollte aber seinen zweck erfüllen.

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  • korrekt wären beide lösungen...


    sollte nicht so hochgestochen wirken, also Tortenmann, nimm die einfachere version. man soll ja glauben, dass von nem 13-jährigen ist ;)
    lass uns wissen, was dabei rauskam :)

  • Zitat

    Original von stresserella
    korrekt wären beide lösungen...


    ja, aber which klingt da irgendwie noch beschissener als that. wenn ich mir das jetzt nochmal so anschau, frage ich mich, ob ich nicht doch noch ein wenig dicht von gestern war. irgendwie alles recht merkwürdig konsturiert.



    wenn der/die lehrer/in was zu meckern hat, soll sie sich bei mir melden.

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    "Wenn Sie Kleptomanin sind, dann klauen Sie doch bei Frau Suhrbier. Als
    Sozialdemokratin findet die Diebstahl ganz normal." - Alfred Tetzlaff